Statistical Interpretation (Born Rule)
'QM' is not introduced as being short for 'Quantum Mechanics' (is obvious to us, but not to students)
the probability of finding a particle
suggest "finding (measuring) a particle" to stress the importance of measuring/measurements in this context
The 2nd figure is not immediately obvious that it represents the wave function belonging to a particle standing still. It might be a nice example/practice for the students to derive this themselves.
The example given should go directly after the first figure, because it explains the same thing